choreomania
An original dance film in pre-production at a historic site in Grand Rapids, MI (USA)
Abstract
Several survivors of societal breakdown enter a boarded-up building seeking refuge from brutal conditions, only to discover a greater danger inside.
Premise
This project is an artistic investigation of the human tendency to create “us” and “them” categories for people, as a means of self-survival.
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Opening
A small group of men in an old Toyota truck park halfway on the sidewalk in front of a very old church with boarded-up doors.
...Themes:
Dancing Plague of 1518
Tribalism, survivalism
Us vs. Them thinking
In-group, Out-group
Treatment of strangers
Empathy and bias
Fear of the “other”
Migration, sanctuary
Good Samaritans
Protection of group, self
Social Identity Theory
Treatment of strangers
Minimal Group Paradigm
Out-group Homogeneity Effect
The Hermitage (photos)
The following images relate to the “current timeline” filming whereas the flashback sequence will be differentiated in part by the progress of renovation in specific areas. That is to say, the parsonage is more renovated and looks to be in “good working order” so this will work well for the flashback scenes, before the collapse of society. On the other hand, the sanctuary and basement areas are less renovated at this time, so they will work better to convey both the passage of time (post flashback) and the deterioration of the space post societal collapse.
Addt’l images to be uploaded in August for the parsonage (flashback).
Sanctuary – 9:00 A.M.

Balcony Stained Glass – 6:00 P.M.

Additional Spaces
The Libretto
Below is the current draft of the story, containing numerous points where we need to identify dance and filming opportunities, and add those to the script.
Ultimately, as we coalesce all the input from movies and filmmakers, we convert this to some form of storyboarding.
Sequencing ABRIDGED
– arrive in vehicle, park on curb
– enter church despite warning msg
– find a place to sleep inside
– hear sounds from sanctuary
– enter sanctuary, see HOSTS
– attempt communication via movement
– flashback details HOSTS arrival
Story (draft 260818)
A small group of survivors of a post-societal world park their old truck haphazardly on the sidewalk in front of an old church with boards over the doors. An AM radio frequency is spray painted on the boards. The survivors hand crank their radio and dial into the frequency (1518) but they only hear static. Upon exiting the vehicle and closing the doors, a message starts to play: a warning.
A single “infected” person stands between them and the door, making a repetitive series of movements. The survivors mimic the movements and avoid confrontation, making their way into the old church.
The survivors are nearly fully covered up with jackets and hoodies, with steam-punk type goggles over their eyes. Upon entering the church, they see windows and glass doors covered by old newspaper and cardboard. The survivors walk past the sanctuary doors, making their way up two flights of stairs to the balcony overlooking the sanctuary. They quietly set their bags down and fall asleep.
[Possible hyper lapse shot of sunlight going through phases, beaming through different stained glass windows that surround all sides of the sanctuary.)
(Music notes: a capella, dark-version of “You Are My Sunshine” (Jennifer C) and some of the verses may be reused later when there are instruments or audio tracks beginning in the progression of next scenes. Musical foreshadowing, or a gradual accumulation of the component pieces of the larger score.)
LATER THAT DAY
An unknown amount of time passes; the survivors awaken to dusk light entering the stained glass windows of the sanctuary. They look over the edge of the balcony, noticing movement below. There appear to be figures in some pews, but the sanctuary is full of shadows and it’s difficult to see clearly.
The survivors make their way down the two flights of stairs, using a side door to enter the sanctuary. They encounter an “infected” person inside the sanctuary, locked into the familiar cycle of repetitive movements. They imitate the movements and make their way beyond the ‘infected’ person.
Seeing hands emerging from several pews, the survivors move quickly to the front of the sanctuary and navigate to stairs leading downstairs.
Escaping to and apprehensively exploring the lower level, they encounter another infected person(s) in the basement rooms. They turn around and go back up to the sanctuary.
Ultimately the lead survivor comes face-to-face with the “infected” person they first noticed in the sanctuary. He panics on locking eyes with the “infected” person in the sanctuary, dropping his hand-crank light on the ground. The drop puts the light into a strobe mode. Slow motion with a tight shot on the infected person’s eyes, which seem to hold some glimmer of understanding, rather than fear.
FLASHBACK
Several years prior, seven sisters are living in the parsonage of an old church. A number of scenes unfold with laughter and dancing. (Obviously this needs to be fleshed out.)
BACK TO REALITY
Modern day. Return to survivor and infected person locking eyes with strobe light flashing.
INT. CHURCH – NIGHT or DAWN
(Assuming we rig very bright lights outside WEST stained-glass window, like moonlight.) The light of the moon coming into the space Transition to harder, heavier rock style music. Survivor backs up to show the perspective of the hosts, who are equally as scared by the visitors, as they are of them.
Both are controlled by different things but fear is present in both.
The movement in this sequence is the bulk of the non-pedestrian / primary dance. It needs to be worked out choreographically.
This point is a blank bc we have things to work out and the story will need to follow what develops from the choreo.
Likely leading to a minor invasion attempt by infected persons outside requiring some development of bonds of trust between the survivors and the sisters.
Ultimately leading to a departure?
Warning Message: origin
In the opening sequence, a ‘warning message’ plays on the survivors’ radio, but they do not hear it. The text for this message has a fascinating history.
...Warning Message: text
This place is a message, and part of a system of messages… pay attention to it! Sending this message was important to us. We considered ourselves to be a powerful culture.
This place is not a place of honor… no highly esteemed deed is commemorated here… nothing valued is here. What is here was dangerous and repulsive to us.
This message is a warning about danger.
The danger is in a particular location… it increases towards a center… the center of danger is here… of a particular size and shape, and below us.
The danger is still present, in your time, as it was in ours. The danger is to the body, and it can kill.
The form of the danger is an emanation of energy.
The danger is unleashed only if you substantially disturb this place physically. This place is best shunned and left uninhabited.
The Dancing Plague of 1518

From an article about the Dancing Plague:
In the sweltering summer of 1518, in the French city of Strasbourg, a woman named Frau Troffea stepped into the street and began to dance.
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Possible Title:
Ergot
Ergot (/ˈɜːrɡət/ UR-gət) or ergot fungi refers to a group of fungi of the genus Claviceps, it’s one of the theorized causes of the Dancing Plague of 1518.
Other Visual Element Ideas
The survivors’ only clue to find the rumored sanctuary can be a photograph taken in the style of the first ever photo ever taken (pictured below):

Potential Motivations
While “us vs them” and in-group / out-group themes dominate interactions that occur, we have a lot of space to consider motivations and other elements driving the characters.
...Music Notes
Whoever creates the music, whatever it is, and however it is made, we should be cognizant of the moments during filming when big audio changes are needed, big moments. We will be planning out the stillness and crescendos in advance, and acquiring music that fits our movement score (this means filming and dance, both). Rather than fitting the filming and dance into a pre-established form.
Also here’s a real link to new expunk music.
The links to the music by Tomahawk and the video by Massive Attack are not about specifics, just feelings.
Be interesting to discuss some (momentary or longer) insertion of a version of You Are My Sunshine that is true to the song? Bc that shit is dark and heavy and it could be devastatingly awesome if done right, a la Jennifer C.
Visual Elements:
Filming
EXT ideas
- Tilt shift on opening
- Compositing for ext?
- Or just WB and smoke bombs?
INT ideas
- Same model cameras sideXside during pivotal moment for instantaneous fps transition mid take (a la Blackhawk Down)
Filming Opportunities
Lists of imagery, links to evoke brainstorms
Coalesce from below AND the Notes page about this
Backlit (middle ish)
Inspiration: backlit shots
I Hate When Girls Die video by Die Spitz
Masks of men as defense strategy in case of occupation
Filming follows story
No cool ideas for shots unless
https://www.reddit.com/r/Filmmakers/s/DE98vD3icv
Here’s the source video for the photos of multi-arms:
https://youtu.be/-lKafyA1eB0?si=2ACjCyLqdGFoWLY9
And here’s another video about strobing, which we did with Amy at Hyatt’s using John’s big strobes at the old warehouse office off Bridge. But we just took stills, this is about finding something new to say with strobes and movement. Requiring innovation in the design of both lighting and dance.
Now watch the same effect over cranked:
https://youtu.be/3hV6PFakZwk?si=YtpvaVQ6yo3pJxfT
Inspiration: Time-Lapse Video
Will need some height in order to avoid eight million headlights… maybe on the outside, it’d be on the scaffolding focused on the chapel
Filming Opportunities
Light and Color
- Radical lighting changes after a while of setting expectations, out of nowhere
- Lighting changes can include quick bright/dark over several seconds, or strobe
- Right to left when first going inside, left to right when shit gets real
- Model int/ext lighting in 3D software and/or AI of photos, intentionality
- Rules: pick a few and stick with them throughout, while breaking others
Strobing effects can be powerful for peak moments when slightly over cranked. While the following clip shows a tutorial for still photography, the models are seen in video clips documenting the still-image process: it’s an effect that could translate to film, if done for film: it’s a jump-off point to see if we can come up with something new and even more interesting, based on these raw ingredients.
A pinch of spectacle
In the cold light of day, the survivors make sudden realizations about what they imagined to be sanctuary, and it flips their world upside down. We’re long overdue to do a 180 degree flip starting with what appears to be someone on the ceiling but they’re really on the ground, I’m sure there must be a name for this type of thing.

If we ever lose our bearings on direction, the idea of “sanctuary” can be a north star.
Filming Opportunities
Strobing
After the lead survivor drops his flashlight, and it changes to a bright strobing mode, there is a quick break to the flashback – and then returns to the fast and dramatic post-flashback sequence that involves strobes for a while.
Below is a video about strobing, something we tested with Amy at Hyatt’s using John’s big strobes at the old warehouse office off Bridge. But we just took stills, this is about finding something new to say with strobes and movement.
This clip from Aliens is a general reference to strobing as a way to reflect/create tension, tho it’d need to be more directional, so the frame falls blacker when strobe isn’t hitting. And maybe slightly oc’d to really punch up the strobe effect, and to give the movers a little more time to establish beats of movement while the strobe is flashing, so it’s intelligible.
Filming Opportunities
Strobing (subtitle?)
If face/head stays ‘still’ while dancer is standing, moving arms (see photos) could VIDEO capture this effect by removing blocks of frames in consistent increments for a few seconds? Assuming the rest of the room and the rest of the dancer’s body wasn’t also transitioning or moving through space.
In the example video, you can see an example of multi-arms with still/strobe (below) but the challenge of course if finding a way to balance btw the dancers holding their head/neck still while movings arms, and removing enough frames to give it some zip.
Visual Elements:
Basement
Basement: Night of the Hunter
It might be compelling to consider the looks that are created in The Night of the Hunter. Click to learn more about how this film was shot, it’s really interesting and goes to the importance of process and innovation: they needed to draw on existing and logistical limitations to create something better, that enhances the storytelling.
Also, obligatory still image from a TOOL video:

Movement Opportunities
List of places and sequences
Beriozka
A few examples of the Beriozka style of dance/movement, not sure if it’s applicable or plausible, but it’s definitely dope AF.
Theory of confrontation and resolution
A lot of dynamics at play in the moments following the visitors encountering the ‘hosts’ who exhibit such strange and sometimes predatory behavior. The visitors could be considered guests or invaders, at any given moment: they could react with both fear and diplomacy, puzzled yet desperate to remain in the closest thing to sanctuary they have found in months.
Gender dynamics
Visitors present as androgynous, while hosts may present as feminine (if we were to follow the template of the Dancing Plague’s ‘patient zero,’ Frau Troffea.) The visitors could approach their unexpected encounter with the hosts in a way that is intended to de-escalate, while the hosts might begin to group-up and assert dominance through potentially threatening behaviors. There is room to explore the dynamics of a vulnerable group responding to a potential threat or capture by a seemingly dominant group: the intentions of the “other” are not entirely clear to either group.
Movement:
Animalistic
Trying to stay in my lane of course (pun) but sometimes it’s cool when dance is confrontational, you know, like the animals do it:
Deprecated: Mannequins
Mannequins originally played a larger role in visuals, with earlier drafts. This section contains some of the more compelling notes relating to mannequins, in case we decide it’s interesting to explore some of these visuals (i.e. actual mannequins in pews, scattered about, like 3-4 of them as distractions or just haunting imagery.)
Visual Element:
Mannequins
Mannequins could be a visual element for the story. They represent a dynamic: trapped in time and place. But they seek to escape, when new visitors arrive, to take their place.
Below are some relevant real-world stories and images relating to mannequins.
Rotoscope: Faces on mannequins
It could be easy and interesting to “paint” dancer faces on mannequins for a fleeting moment maybe, makeup and filming then rotoscoping in post:
Visual Element:
Ambiguity
Random clip of something that means something else, based on movement and perspective.









