choreomania
Original dance film in pre-production at a nationally registered historic site in Grand Rapids, MI (USA)
Abstract
Several survivors of societal breakdown enter a boarded-up building seeking refuge from brutal conditions, only to discover a greater danger inside.
Premise
This project is an artistic investigation of the human tendency to categorize others as “us” or “them,” originating as a survival mechanism.
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Opening
A small group of men in an old Toyota truck park halfway on the sidewalk in front of a very old church with boarded-up doors.
...Location Scouting
The Hermitage (interior, exterior)
Parsonage / living areas are freshly renovated, ideal for flashbacks to earlier time, before the collapse of society, in a world full of light and color.
Meanwhile, sanctuary areas are unfinished and weathered, implying time has passed — ideal for the post-societal timeline, after the flashback.
The site decides what happens where.
Sanctuary – 9:00 A.M.

Balcony Stained Glass – 6:00 P.M.

Locations for later “post-societal” scenes
Locations for flashback sequences
Scripting
The Libretto
Below is the current draft of the story, containing numerous points where we need to identify and describe creative opportunities for movement and filming. These opportunities will advance the story. We will coalesce creative input from movers and shooters, add these notes to script, and storyboard.
Libretto ABRIDGED
– survivors take refuge in shuttered church
– sleep disrupted by sounds in sanctuary
– survivors encounter “infected” sisters
– flee downstairs, encounter addt’l sisters
– all survivors/sisters return to sanctuary
– eyes connect, begin flashback sequence
– end flashback, main sanctuary dance
– attempt communication with movement
– external threat emerges (“infected”)
– resolution (tbd)
Libretto ELABORATED
A group of survivors in a post-societal world park their old truck haphazardly on the sidewalk in front of an old church with boards over the doors. An AM radio frequency is spray painted on the boards. The survivors hand crank their radio and dial into the frequency (1518) but they only hear static. Upon exiting the vehicle and closing the doors, a message starts to play: a warning.
...The Warning Message
Origins of the message
In the opening sequence, a ‘warning message’ plays on the survivors’ radio, but they do not hear it. The origin of this warning is fascinating.
...Text version of (audio) warning
This place is a message, and part of a system of messages... pay attention to it! Sending this message was important to us. We considered ourselves to be a powerful culture.
This place is not a place of honor... no highly esteemed deed is commemorated here... nothing valued is here. What is here was dangerous and repulsive to us.
This message is a warning about danger.
The danger is in a particular location... it increases towards a center... the center of danger is here... of a particular size and shape, and below us.
The danger is still present, in your time, as it was in ours. The danger is to the body, and it can kill.
The form of the danger is an emanation of energy.
The danger is unleashed only if you substantially disturb this place physically. This place is best shunned and left uninhabited.
Relevant History
The Dancing Plague of 1518

From an article about the Dancing Plague:
In the sweltering summer of 1518, in the French city of Strasbourg, a woman named Frau Troffea stepped into the street and began to dance.
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Related: titling possibilities
One of the theorized causes of the Dancing Plague of 1518 is Ergot (/ˈɜːrɡət/ UR-gət) or ergot fungi – referring to a group of fungi of the genus Claviceps. Ergot has a nice, simple ring to it. Or, the working title choreomania is kind of great. It is hoped that other possibilities come to mind, as we go through this process. None of which can or should include the title “untitled” because that is not on the table lol.
Character Motivations
While “us vs. them” is an overarching theme that colors a lot of character choices, we should consider other motivations that might be at play. Big or small. There’s a lot of room for character development during flashback sequences, when choices had less overwhelming consequences, and it was easier to find stillness and joy. It’s easy to imagine, in a post-societal world, there would be a strong desire to go back to that time.
...Music Notes
Whoever creates the music, we should be cognizant of the moments during filming when big audio changes are needed. *This section contains some important notes re. music, be thee invited to click “Read More” below.
...Movement Opportunities
List of locations for choreography
...Gender dynamics
Notes regarding casting
The traveling survivors wear clothing that covers most of their body (including eyes) and present as androgynous or male. Why?
...Visual Elements
Filming, Lighting, Imagery and Post
Photo in survivor’s vehicle
The survivors have a photo of the church in their truck. So, maybe they’ve been looking for this place, for a long time. The photo is taped to their dashboard, in the space where modern vehicles would have digital displays.
The photo example (below) is actually the first photograph ever taken and developed. We could create a grainy photo like this (of the church) that the survivors carry with them when they first arrive.

Man In Void (strobing)
Video example of mover w/ strobelight
“Timeshift” Plugin
Effect (plugin) we could use in Davinci.
Click here for effect info, examples.

- Screenshot
Backlighting example
Video example of subject w/ backlighting
Strobe with speedlight, multi-arm fx
Photo technique for strobing arms, doesn’t apply directly to video (but hopefully helpful for conveying the general idea.) Hopefully this video opens at the timecode where results are shown, because this guy is a talker omg:
Additional stroboscopic effect (clip):
Another photo-technique tutorial that doesn’t exactly apply to video, but results are compelling. Another photographer who loves to hear himself talk, tried to get video to open at actual results (near end):
Strobe effect used in Alien
This clip from Aliens is a general reference to strobing as a way to reflect/create tension, tho it’d need to be more directional, so the frame falls blacker when strobe isn’t hitting. And maybe slightly oc’d to really punch up the strobe effect, and to give the movers a little more time to establish beats of movement while the strobe is flashing, so it’s intelligible.
Time-lapse (hyper-lapse) video
Hyperlapse videos are useful for showing passages of time in a day, in order to establish a “you are here” sense of orientation for the viewer. Very important to know where you are, especially before you get lost.
Lots of opportunities for experimenting with overnight “dusk-dawn” time-lapse videos inside sanctuary. We can even compile multiple time-lapse video angles into one sequence for the part where survivors sleep.
Stabilizing on the subject’s head
This technique has become overused in some regards, but that’s because it’s (overused) for “the whole entire video,” rather than one tool in a big toolkit. While often overused, this stabilization technique can be really compelling, especially if it’s used tactically and in small doses.
Basement: Night of the Hunter
Click to read an article about how the creative team behind The Night of the Hunter developed a deeply compelling look, by exploiting the shadows. They used their budgetary limiations to make something pretty revolutionary. Here’s a clip from Hunter that does an amazing texture with the silhouette of the woman with the shotgun:
Beriozka
Examples of the Beriozka style of dance/movement. Obviously the sanctuary at The Hermitage is carpeted, but maybe there are some possibilities for traveling across a floor in visually compelling ways. Shadows, etc.
Movement:
Animalistic
Trying to stay in my lane of course (pun) but sometimes it’s cool when dance is confrontational, you know, like the animals do it:
Visual Element: Ambiguity
Random clip of something that means something else, based on movement and perspective.
Additional imagery for inspiration





Random ideas and notes
Survivors awaken, 180-degree camera roll? We might consider a 180-degree camera roll shot when the survivors hear movement in the sanctuary, from below their balcony position. Maybe the 180-degree roll be simply “face down on the balcony pew, sleeping, starting upside down.” Or, maybe it could also break another plane and (while rotating) the body of the camera could move out over the sanctuary area, to where the movement is detected.
First encounter (sanctuary) dolly zoom? Not only is the lead traveler/survivor seeing an “infected” person in the sanctuary for the first time since believing they had found shelter… he also is detecting something human, uninfected, in the eyes of the sisters. This might be a good time to represent all of these different reactions in one awesome dolly-zoom shot. Maybe with strobes as the primary lighting.
Strategic use of tilt-shift (opening): Tilt-shift on opening can help relieve our inability to remake the exterior world or do tons of CGI… just do the wide in tilt and then we don’t even have to worry about half friggin screen amirite.
General heads-up re. composition: houghtfulness about composition with regard to any masking or compositing we have to do in post.
Smoke bombs are in good supply: Erin has been buying a lot of smoke bombs every 4th of July since this project became an embryo of an idea… it was obvious from the start that we would need a lot of smoke bombs.
Deprecated visual
Mannequins had a bigger role
Mannequins originally played a larger role in the story, especially the visuals. Maybe there’s still some minor role that mannequins could play, visually – a few of them scattered about the sanctuary like scarecrows.
Below is an interesting story about mannequins.



















